Wind in my hair and water on my skin
On a seemingly endless trail
One step after another
I must continue and never stop
I must keep momentum
One step after another
My feet are slipping and shoulders are burning
My eyes are watering
One step after another
My heart is beating but my friend is helping
I feel the weight lifting
One step after another
Up the steep hills and down slippery rocks
Triping over thick roots
One step after another
Determination
Excellence
Courage
One step after another
I must be strong and must fight the pain
I must fight the wilderness
One step after another
Together we are strong and will fight the pain
The wilderness is no longer our enemy but our friend
We all march together; One step after another
Alone I am weak
Together we are strong
Together we can survive Temagami
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2 comments:
This is really strong adam... i like how ukinda turned it into a metaphor
u were smart taking the bugs in my teeth thing out... it looses the meaning... this has no air words.. the stanzas are short aand quick
nice
Don't make it so short and in paragraphs maybe in the middle ya thart's it that's were it should go...........And well when that's it It's good that you added Determination Excellence Courage
in it but you could a dd a little more
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