It is expression
Of what you may feel inside
It is happiness,
Or sadness,
Love,
Or hatred
It is what you make of it
Clay to be molded
Or a hard steel beam
It must be handled carefully
Yet aggressively too
It is a tap
From which all our emotions can flow
It is life
And death
It is beauty
Of what you may feel inside
It is happiness,
Or sadness,
Love,
Or hatred
It is what you make of it
Clay to be molded
Or a hard steel beam
It must be handled carefully
Yet aggressively too
It is a tap
From which all our emotions can flow
It is life
And death
It is beauty
It is poetry
3 comments:
i likw thes poem
maybe try and take out some fillers
Expression
What you feel inside
hapiness
(or) sadness
love
(or) hatred
what you make of it
clay to be molded
(or) a hard steel beam
handle carefully
yet agressive too
a tap
our emotions can flow
life
death
beauty
poetry
this is just a basix you can add a few take out a few or only use some, or all or none
take out air words is is not needed put it's instead of it is it would make the poem more effective. i believe like alex that you can take out things like or and and but leave in It is poetry at the end it leaves the reader thinking.
By the way you have to describe some of these poems. :)
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